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-## MikuFactorXL
+## MikuFactoryXL
 
 ![image/png](https://cdn-uploads.huggingface.co/production/uploads/6342619a9948f573f37a4a60/Y19X7ZFSBFd9unBCWY2h3.png)
 
 ## About
 
-This is my first PonyXL merge, it is just based off random models I picked off CivitAI. The results are amazing to me at least, best PonyXL model avaible I think personally! However I am very biased. I tried to select models for following
+This is my first PonyXL merge, a culmination of somewhat randomly selected models from CivitAI.  The results, in my opinion, are really good (though admittedly, I'm biased!). I focused on models that have:
 
-## Model selection criteria
-- Good small details
-- Ones that look least like AI slop, more solv
-- Ones with least artifacts in example images
-- Ones that I find personally appealing
-- Bright colors
+## Model Selection Criteria
 
-## Model merge techique
+* **Sharp Small Details:**  Models with a knack for intricate intricacies.
+* **Natural Aesthetics:**  Minimizing the "AI slop" look, prioritizing clarity etc.
+* **Artifact-Freeish Quality:**  Selecting models with clean examples and minimal artifacts.
+* **Personal Appeal:**  A subjective but crucial factor in my choices.
+* **Vibrant Colors:**  Pretty color other than gray waow.
 
-Idk I just merged bunch of models in ComfyUI, they are all listed in `mega-merge.json` to look at good luck finding them all on CivitAI. My PC almost crapped itself and had to make 200GB swap file, so like would be nice
+## Model Merge Technique
+
+A somewhat unorthodox approach – I merged a collection of models in ComfyUI (full list in `mega-merge.json`).  Finding them all on CivitAI might be a challenge – my PC nearly overloaded during the process, requiring a massive 200GB swap file!
 
 ## Observations
 
-- Great quality
-- Amazing prompt following
-- Good annotomy most of time, can still make mistakes
-- Very creative posing
-- Overall very creative
-- Faces have sovl
-- Good small details
-- Thin line art
-- Understands a lot of concepts
+* **Great Quality:**  Visually nice and refined.
+* **Excellent Prompt Following:**  Interprets prompts really accurately compared to others.
+* **Generally Strong Anatomy:**  Occasional messes up, but mostly accurate.
+* **Creative Posing:**  Generates creative poses.
+* **Overall Creativity:**  Seems really creative in a unqiue way.
+* **Detailed Faces ("Solv"):**  Expressive facial features, less dead pan AI look.
+* **Fine Small Details:**  Adds intricate details a lot, usually less blurred than others.
+* **Thin Line Art:**  Nice thin lines compared to some models.
+* **Good Conceptual Understanding:**  Seems good at understanding concepts.